Thursday 16 May 2019

The invisible man

2 comments:

  1. Hi Aimee. I like your writing it is very descriptive. I like how you have added the picture of the topic as the background. Next time I think that you could make the size of the writing because its a little bit hard to read. Keep up the good work Aimee.

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  2. Hey Aimee, I like your spooky background for your story. It is very appropriate.
    Can't wait to see what you are going to do next.

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