Friday 21 December 2018

A local delicacy

3 comments:

  1. Hi there Aimee!

    Thanks for sharing such a wonderful recipe. This has made me quite hungry, maybe I will try to make it tonight. Do you help with the cooking at home? I’d love to know if you have tried making this recipe by yourself? Hopefully a trusted adult has helped you with the frying pan.

    I appreciate the slideshow you made! And great choice of colours and fonts.

    Keep up
    Hasiba

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    1. Kia ora Aimee,

      I agree with Hasiba, your recipe seems so delicious, it's making my mouth water already! I absolutely love all the colours and pictures you have used to present your work, it's all very eye-catching, excellent work! Just remember, if you are going to use images that you have found online, you need to make sure that you attribute them (give credit) to the owner to make sure that you earn the points that you've worked hard for. Check out our guide to posting images here:
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      Best,
      Evelyn :D

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  2. Kia Ora Aimz!

    It's Katelynn here!

    WOW this recipe for WHITE BAIT FRITTERS is amazing! I like the way you have set out your presentation it is very bright and colourful and the fonts you have chosen are super cool. But make sure you choose a font we can read, as the second slide with the recipe is a little harder to read than the rest of them! But other than that your presentation is really cool and you should be very proud of yourself. I like the images of whitebait on the first slide they look really yummy!

    Keep up all of your great work Aimee!
    He whetu koe! (Your a star!)

    Merry Christmas!

    Katelynn

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